• naevaTheRat@lemmy.dbzer0.com
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    21 hours ago

    The only error I can see is “the data is” should be “the data are”. Stylistically I would also change utilizing to using, which conveys exactly the same meaning and is more accessible.

    Otherwise I believe this is regular English. It’s ok to have difficulty comprehending language, but it’s more productive to ask questions about the parts you don’t understand.

    Can I help with any specific questions?

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      16 hours ago

      The data is correct English in this context. I was talking more about DOI: 10.5281/zenodo.146585059.

      But others have said what it is.

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        15 hours ago

        Anything that people write is correct really, like language is created by anyone making sounds or patterns to share meaning.

        Data is a plural though, seppo dominance using it as singular is changing it outside that miserable empire but it’s one of my hangups haha.