I’m definitely not a writer, but “Fallen into a deep sleep, his face expressionless, a light snore escaped (escapes?) him” sounds nice to me.
I envy your confidence in writing! Every time I tried I get like 2 sentences down and immediately think “who the fuck am I to be writing something thinking anyone should even care to read this?” Lol
https://imgur.com/gallery/bullock-snoring-6cVTf4K
This would be a light snore, right??
“A light snore escaped him. He was in a sleep so deep he was completely devoid of expression.”
Yeah that sounds pretty light lol
I’m definitely not a writer, but “Fallen into a deep sleep, his face expressionless, a light snore escaped (escapes?) him” sounds nice to me.
I envy your confidence in writing! Every time I tried I get like 2 sentences down and immediately think “who the fuck am I to be writing something thinking anyone should even care to read this?” Lol
Same honestly but I love thinking about writing!!! Thanks!!
What’s Larry’s expression?
I can’t decide if he is sighing or sobbing
He is sleeping but very tired
Maybe he’d be “weary”
Or disinterested, bored, depending on the greater context even possibly dejected. Weary works too though